So, my friend wanted me to recreate this sentence:
I was walking home from my job when I was suddenly tackled, I blacked out.
He wanted to see how well I can recreate (because his writing SUUUCKS) the sentence from some fanfiction he was reading (probably Septiplier). I'd thought I share this piece of trash that I created:
"Lock up the place before you leave"
Those words replayed in my head as I reach for my coat and slide it on. Walking over to the door, the old wooden floorboards creek underneath me, the glass door slips open and I made my way out, turning around to lock the door up as the words replayed like a video tape in my head. After locking up I set the words free, not needing them anymore.
The air was cold, I pulled my scarf up to my nose, protecting it from said cold. Clutching my jacket, bringing it closer to my body, hoping that it'll make myself warmer. I passed an alleyway, and I heard a noise. It was not coming from the alley, rather, it was coming from the bushes that my back is currently turned to. I turn around, only to be met by a body, flinging towards my direction and making contact with my own. I hit my head against the concreate that I was walking on just several sections ago. It pained the back of my head, knowing that I hit the concreate harder than I should have. Black stains covered the rims of my eye sight, until my eyelids roofed the rest with darkness.
(bleh, I might turn this into a fanfiction later on if I really wanted to)
